I was given another scene, from the film Watching and Waiting, to edit in which ever way I felt necessary. In our practical, we went and watched everyone's work, leaving feedback in the form of 5 positives and 5 negatives about what we thought of what we watched.
Pros
When people watched my edit, they generally thought that I had done a few things very well. The viewers enjoyed my use of a fade at the start and end of the scene as this is a nice and smooth transition.
They also liked how I timed my use of shot reverse shots, as well as my reaction shots, because this propelled the conversation in the video.
The audience particularly liked how I timed the generally cutting, during pauses and mid sentences, between the two characters in the conversation, as this made the edit look very smooth and interesting.
Finally, the reveal of the second character, Dickie, was also very well done as I didn't suddenly have him appear out of nowhere; I used a shot where he was out of focus at first, but then brought into focus as Katherine notices him being in the room.
Cons
One bad aspect to my edit was the loud volume of the dialogue, which can be easily rectified by turning down the decibels on each audio file to a comfortable level at an average volume that is used on the computer.
Conversely, the ambient sound at the beginning sounded too quiet for the viewers, so this made it sound somewhat empty. This can be sorted out by turning up the volume.
When Lisa, the girl wearing white trousers in the video, is supposed to have exited the room with Michael, I didn't include this at all. It gave an illusion that she simply disappeared without an explanation. This can obviously be sorted out by finding the appropriate clip and arranging the existing timeline in a way that accommodates this new addition.
One shot, where Dickie says "There is a time when technology won't get faster, was considered by one viewer to be a little too long. An easy fix for this is to add a shot reverse shot for more variation of content onscreen.
While the general continuity is considered to be very good by the audience, some aspects look somewhat out of place, particularly when Dickie is looking down and then he is looking back up in the next shot. Timing of the in and out points of the clips in question can be rectified here for a more consistent viewing.
Link to video:
https://youtu.be/E-ZseHb0GcA